Hi, I think you looked very comfortable in front of the camera, Good Job! Having you explain the business idea verbally really helped bring it alive. The video was a little long, and I think you hit the main points in the first 90 seconds and could have reduced it further. I also liked how you smiled throughout, it shows your enthusiasm for the project. :)
Good pitch all-in-all. The only main thing I would say is that you should shorten the initial story and maybe even include an example of your own, it creates a personal link to you and your product. I can definitely see your passion and it shows because you have already thought about how you're able to execute this idea
1. The Opportunity "UF students on a budget have a hard time finding accessible, affordable, and quality photography services because the average full photography sessions are generally costly. 2. Who : UF students, mostly who are graduating soon because most of them want to take graduation photos What : Not having a go-to photography service that fits with a student budget Why : Because many photography services with quality photos can cost a lot. 3. The Hypothesis The who: although this is mainly targeted at students in Gainesville, families with a tight budget who may want a small family session or a small event can use the service. The what: Not every student or family would need a photography service. For graduation photoshoots, it is seasonal. The Why: For UF students who are about to graduate, it is a very important moment in their life and many wish for professional photos of that special moment that captures who they...
My solution to this opportunity is ...... to start a local photography service that offers 20-minute mini photo sessions targeting mainly the large populations of students and graduating students in Gainesville as well as anyone else that wishes for a service that offers 5 to 10 photos for a low price. My ideal price for the service is a $50 session fee that includes 5 photos and additional photos can be purchased $10 each whereas other known local photographers only offer the normal hour-long photography service starting from $150 up to $400 just for the session alone and images are purchased separately. In this way, I've found a niche market for people who want quality photos on a student budget. The reason why photography studios charge this amount of money is that they have a physical location and employees to pay. In my case, I'm working alone, I own all of my professional equipment and editing softw...
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ReplyDeleteI think you looked very comfortable in front of the camera, Good Job! Having you explain the business idea verbally really helped bring it alive. The video was a little long, and I think you hit the main points in the first 90 seconds and could have reduced it further. I also liked how you smiled throughout, it shows your enthusiasm for the project. :)
Good pitch all-in-all. The only main thing I would say is that you should shorten the initial story and maybe even include an example of your own, it creates a personal link to you and your product. I can definitely see your passion and it shows because you have already thought about how you're able to execute this idea
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