10A Elevator Pitch

P.S. Could you kindly watch my video on the Youtube page? You may be able to increase the sound there better. Thank you.


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  1. Hi,
    I think you looked very comfortable in front of the camera, Good Job! Having you explain the business idea verbally really helped bring it alive. The video was a little long, and I think you hit the main points in the first 90 seconds and could have reduced it further. I also liked how you smiled throughout, it shows your enthusiasm for the project. :)

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  2. Good pitch all-in-all. The only main thing I would say is that you should shorten the initial story and maybe even include an example of your own, it creates a personal link to you and your product. I can definitely see your passion and it shows because you have already thought about how you're able to execute this idea

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