17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2


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One of the comments I received that meant most to me is that one of my group members said he/she liked how comfortable I am in the video. That showed my confidence and assurance in my presentation for my audience. I truly appreciated this comment because I usually get nervous when it comes to public speaking but I feel that I'm slowing overcoming the issue.

3. One of the other feedback that I appreciate is that he/she was being honest about the running time of my pitch which took longer than 90 seconds. So this time, I made sure that I get to the point sooner rather than later and I tried to stick to the time limit. I cut out some parts of my speech to do so, but I'm concerned if I didn't get my points across clearly to my audience because of that.

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  1. ConnorFordMarch 18, 2019 at 5:18 PM

    Hey Byung,
    I really enjoyed your elevator pitch. I think it was a very good idea to include the personal story about the problem you had and the solution that you came across. From other pitches I had seen, I believe that you were the fist one that put a price, which I believe was a good idea and a relatively good price.
    Hope this helps!

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