22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3


2. I only got one feedback for my second pitch and I got a positive one. The viewer appreciated that I talked about my own experience showing how relatable I am to potential customers. Also, the viewer said that talking about the price of the service was important as other pitches did not have.

3. Since I only got one positive feedback, I didn't have to change in the content of my pitch, however, I practiced several times to improve my presentation and attitude. I wanted to be as confident as I could and I want viewers to feel my positive attitude and confidence. So this time, I gave my very best to get out of my comfort zone to push myself to be very confident. I want to look and sound like I know what I'm doing and I have confidence in my business.

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  1. Gerielle SuffyApril 1, 2019 at 11:24 AM

    Great job on the latest pitch! It's good to that even though you didn't get any criticism, you still strive to make your pitch better with your performance. You definitely showed more confidence in your pitch, I felt the positive attitude you wanted the viewers to feel. I like knowing that you pushed yourself out of your comfort zone so you can look more confident.

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  2. Jordan MisaApril 1, 2019 at 11:59 PM

    I loved your pitch and think you perfected it this time. It is hard to do these on camera but you were setup and prepared well and it was visible. I think it is great that you were pushed outside your comfort zone as I have always experienced this during this assignment. Your confidence was an important factor in your success in this pitch and your positive attitude definitely helped.

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